nice

So cute! It's sad that Neil died...but this was still really cute! haha, I can just imagine Setsuna watching Lockon shave...haha...something many fangirls would LOVE to wake up to...m...haha!

-Saph

Wonderfully weaved together! I loved your stoic characterization of Setsuna. His train of thought was oh so amusing :) I hate to admit it, but it took me a while to get the chronology Setsuna's memories (haha).

Well-written. I like this. That was completely a refreshing theme to read outlines the common themes.