 RO 1/31/02 . chapter 1 It's quite good. I liked it
But, why so short?
And why she did what she did?
I have a suggestion if you don't mind
What about a Jane's point of view?
The same facts, diferents thoughts.
In this she looks pretty calm but may be she's only faking, and inside she is even nervous than Neil. What do you think?
Please, answer me. I like very much your other stories. Would you want to keep a contact? |