Oh wow... I really like this. Thank you for writing it. I love me some non-con fanfic every once and awhile and this was just what I needed!

Wow! I really like this story! It has a really realistic feel to it- which is always a plus- especially with this series. And it had the creep factor to it with Johann, that I love! Wonderful story!

I like it! It's (dare I say) realistic, within the context of the universe, which is a huge accomplishment for this otherwise unlikely pairing. I mean, I really hate slash, just for the sole reason of being unfeasible. I like when there is actual canon support or at least allusion to the pairing. Anyway, I love what you've done with it.

One small complaint, though: the portrait of Dorian Gray is the thing that changes, whereas Dorian stays unaffected by the toll his life takes on him.