OMG so cute! I was nearly crying. Good job, I hoop to see more from you.

well dang his dad did something good I am shocked well keep up the great and cute work XD

Nice. I like that is has that deleted scene feel to it. Poor Margo, it's not her fault she's a bad cop, all the Oakdale cops suck (Except Hal). You, somehow, managed to inject humor into a serious situation and I love when writers are able to do that.

By the way, I wanted to ask how New Boy was going?