Very nice ending to an exciting adventure.

If this is after Martha left him, shouldn't the Jones family know a good deal about the Doctor and his TARDIS?

I can't believe I missed this! I loved your 1969 story! I think it was my fav 1969 story ever. This was a wonderful follow up!

What a beautiful end to a wonderful story. I hope you choose to write more Doctor/Martha stories in the future, I always love yours.

What's wrong with the second boy? What could the Doctor have prevented about him? Why is there no more after this? Why are you such a good writer?

I just thought I'd let you know that I love you, though I am sad that you had to chose the Dutch to pick on. 49 thousand dead? That's crazy talk.

Awwww! I love this story just as much as the prequel. It's so sweet and I like the mix between Torchwood-centric adventure plot and Ten/Martha romance plot. And the Doctor bonding with the Jones family! *squees* So cute!

I loved it! I'm at work trying not to cry! LOL!

On the 4th paragraph from the bottom, 2nd sentence, you mis-spelled heel.

:squees: Oh I love it! Absolutely bloody well love it!

Thanks for writing.

finally got to read the latest chapters of this and i have to say i loved it! thank you for reposting it! i enjoyed it alot!

Aw! So cute! The end was fast! now what? e

What a great story! Thank you for sharing!

Oh my. Twins! Heheheheheheh JAck will be ribbing him for the next millenia...

oh my, another one? I know I haven't reviewed yet, but I just wanted to say that I am enjoying this, and I'm glad that you considered reposting this story, it's a great read!

Dried up indeed! Intersting! And now what happens?