Thats pretty good. I'm in the middle of writing a Star Fox FanFic. This is probably the best Star Fox one shot I've ever read.

Interesting...

wow this is perfect, it fits the whole before starfox command thing

Nice story, and nice song. keep it up, i like reading these stories.

Aww! What a nice little story lol. Bit emptyish... but it's a songfic, so you can't do much. All in all, pretty good! AWESOME!