i love this story man i like how you got everybody acting in here cool man plz make a sequel whats going to happen next i cant wait plz make more thank you )

very good fanfic

But the end is to "happy" for the tekken storyline I think.

butt still a very good fic

Woohoo! A Kaz/Jin fic! I have been looking for one of those types of stories for a long time! Good for you, girl. I was kinda surprise that Kaz became Xiaoyu's new guardian, and how he also resolved his difference with Lee (or did they?
One question, though why California?

could you imagine kaz and jin eating lunch together?*silence
K: So...is your steak good?*silence
J: Aa.*silence
K: please pass the pepper.*silent as Jin passes pepper
ok my gosh, how tense! the ending dialogue was formal, that's expected. i never expected him to say "dad" though...that was a little scary. the little kid wandering around and getting scared of kazzy was funny.
K: snot-nosed brat. irresponsible parents should have a leash on that child...

oh-kay, kazu-chan...anyway, should we start our round robin now or later? P

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So... was that the end?

I don't really get this at all. What's going on here?

Nice story, but the end ruins it somewhat. I don't really get what's going on.

Wow! that Kazzy/Jinny scene must have been really hard to write! but u did it brilliantly; great job ate! *banzai!*

::in cat-eyed exasperation Mattaku! WHEN WILL THE NEXT CHAPTER BE? AFTER WAITING THIS LONG, HOW LONG WILL IT TAKE TO POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Well, I can say, I definitely like the edge this story has. Good work, Cherie.

must... *gasp* read... *gasp* more... *chokes, rolls over dead*

yeeeee! and the plot thickens! poor jin-jiney! oh, poor kazu-chan too! um..."kazu-chan" just doesn't fit him... heihachi should just retire, but if he did the family wouldn't be as screwed and tekken wouldn't have a story, now would it?

This is a really great story so far. I like how the characters actually seem IC instead of OOC, like they are in some fics. I especially liked the spoiler at the end. (I've seen the ending, so it wasn't really a spoiler to me though. _) Hope to see more soon. Bye! _

Too lazy 2 sign in... anyway... This chapter was interesting. Actually, the whole story is interesting... Cuz you wouldn't think of Kazuya as someone who has a heart... That's really freaky. And the whole Mishima men "I hate you I hate you too" thing is just screwed up... Um, I'm getting off the subject. I like the fic. _ Even though I don't know that much about Tekken... but I still like your fics! Actually, Kazuya seems not too much OOC but he's partially IN character, which is cool. Ara! This is a super-long review, so I better cut it short! Ja!

The Mishima line (including Chaolan and Jin) are in desperate need of therapy! They should go to a family shrink or something! Goodness! hey, that sounds like a good humor fic. And I like how u portrayed kazzy. there is a heart there...somewhere...deep, deep in there...almost microscopic...itty-bitty. great job and thanks for reading mine stories too sissy!

it's about time u got back into the tekken writing game! i mean, i love you! good job, sis!