 TrainWreckOnMelloDays 2009-10-06 . chapter 1i love this so much...this is the only KanamexYuuki story that I can bear to read...I find the the incest thing kind of disturbing...anyway...but it's SO well written...I've read it through multiple times and I still love it! :D |
 twilightrocks999 2009-08-21 . chapter 1wow...loved it...perfectly set |
 HalesXxGriffiths 2009-08-15 . chapter 1the bigging and middle were really good, but the end wasnt AS good, but still...good...i dont know if that makes sense...*shrugs* Really well written too! ^.^
~Hales |
 HAPPY READER LIA 2009-08-04 . chapter 1 WOW! YOU'RE REALLY GOOD AT WRITING LONG STUFF! [:
it's really awesome ~ the reaction from both yuuki and kaname is so sweet |
 luvbug17-25 2009-08-03 . chapter 1hey this was really good u should make it a story! there is so much potential!! especialty since she is pregnant! |
 nessie black 2009-08-01 . chapter 1 that was a great story. you should really wirte more to it or wirte another vampire knight story. you have the talent for a great story writing. |
 Lunar.Butterflies 2009-07-29 . chapter 1ooh! that was excellent!! |
 Usakobunny 2009-07-29 . chapter 1 sad but cute |
 Apple Juice and Candy Floss 2009-07-29 . chapter 1WOW! This was really good! I love your writing style!
This is one of the best one shots I've read in a while XD
But,and this is me being really fussy,there are a few spelling mistakes. But the story was still excellent : ) |
 b-ko 2009-07-28 . chapter 1 liked it |
 Mekalia 2009-07-28 . chapter 1 sexy but sad at the same time |
 Yuuki-Kuran of the Knight 2009-07-28 . chapter 1I loved it!
:D! |
 VampireMaddy 2009-07-28 . chapter 1Oh, ills, that actually gave me goosebumps. Wonderful. The last few paragraphs were so adorable XD
I did wonder a little, how big their bath tub was, for it to accommodate Yuuki and Kaname ;D |
 Chibi Kitt 2009-07-28 . chapter 1-sniff- aw Yuuki just seems so sad
But that was a great story You had the whole story projecting emotion and I didn't notice gramatical mistakes so it was a great story
~Tah tah~ |
 RaIn SpLaSh 2009-07-28 . chapter 1Good, really good |