I felt so bad for Amy during the hours she thought sonic loved her and didn't take a hint. I wish there was at least one more chapter tho I wonder who she was looking at at the end

I'm glad Faye Lock recommends this story.

She was right that people shouldn't think Amy would over react over Sonic saying he doesn't feel the same about her. Amy to me is a strong person, and confident about herself.

But this story... I can tell you tried your best with capturing everyone in character. We don't have a lot of stories like that, so you deserve this compliment
I won't lie, I was surprised about how Bunnie says 'ah' for I, but I guess just didn't know that was fully how people with her accent spoke. And I kinda had to adapt to how you wrote she was a southern belle(it wasn't something I ever saw her as, but don't worry, it's just because I'm more familiar with Sonic characters in the games and Sonic x
But the ending... I really enjoyed the cliffhanger you had, and when I got there, I was trying to wonder who Amy was looking at. Great job for choice of a cliffhanger. But by the way you'd written the interaction with how Tails was cheering her up, I had to remind myself that he's too young for Amy, so she wouldn't just fall for him because he cheered her up. lol

All in all, I enjoyed your story, and putting it in only two chapters didn't ruin it. I think it was a well enough length for the plot.

Interesting ending.

I get it now, I suppose that my lack of knowledge in the archie universe left me a bit- confused in certain parts in the first chapter but it all makes sense now.

I loved Amy's character in the story, her tendency to get carried away in her own world was well-written. What I love about Amy is the fact that although she is very childish (well, technically she is a child) and naive, she is very determined and always remains positive. I think what a lot of Amy writers fail to realize is that not getting her hands on Sonic, or becoming aware Sonic's true feelings, will not bring her down to the point of destroying herself and everything around her. You know that very clearly and I love the way you write it. Her determination written in your words is remarkable. I can still remember your other story, "The Cremation for a Girl's Perfect Future", where you also portray Amy quite nicely, but I like this story far more because of the amount of description on her character was more detailed and touching. This story is a great reference to Amy's character and I would recommend fans of her to read this to truly understand her.

As for Sonic, it makes a lot of sense now. You can't really control what you feel, and this is a very realistic view of the situation. You can't possibly expect him to act any other way. Amy is a clingy, overwhelming girl; Sonic has always been overtaken by her personality (mostly in a negative way). This, of course, is mostly in the archie universe. In the game universe, his attitude towards Amy has tilted towards a positive view nowadays; which only encourages SonAmy fans. But I digress...

I'll make sure to take note from your story for any future Amy references that I might need because this is a perfect sample of the true Amy Rose character. Love the story. Faye Lock

I love your style, the paragraphs and the detail in the story are astonishing. Your grammar and the structure are perfect to me.

As for the story, the amount of detail you put in it made me feel connected to Amy. I was able to understand how she felt easily. The story so far left me heartbroken because she has been acting very naive. Throughout the story I was really wishing she would realize what was going on... but I do believe her girlish attitude would get the best of her.
As for Sonic, it's hard to explain because, personally, I do not believe he loves Amy in the archie universe. Sonic has Sally and their relationship has been pretty solid for the most part; I don't really see him with Amy. His attitude seemed a bit rough and inconsiderate... I really disliked how he acted. Perhaps it was because I was not able to read what he was thinking; I didn't see his point of view explaining the reasons behind his actions, thus he came across that way. But it works! Because the story is Amy-centric and seeing what she sees is appropriate.

This is an unusual story for the SonAmy fandom... it really explains the question mark in the summary. I can see rabid fangirls eating you up for this one! I will read the next chapter and see what happens, I'm actually quite curious. Faye Lock

That was briliance. You are now a faved author.
By the way, at the end, you wrote"The night was young. The sky was illuminated with potential. The stars twinkled not of death but of life. The moon shone happily for she and it knew that Amy Rose was that much closer to finding the one. She glanced over her shoulder at a new set of eyes. Much, much closer...
Who's "a new set of eyes?"

Oh wow, I love this! At the beginning I accepted this to end up all happy for Amy but then I caught on and I felt so bad for her. Any story that can make me feel for the character like this is awesome, and you did it really well. Nice to see something other than a perfect, happy ending to a SonAmy story. Great job. I'll be checking out your other stuff as well!
Jen

The best thing about this story is as your reading it and you know about sonic. You know he never intended to do anything Amy was saying to herself. He was ogling sally and ignoring amy, it was so funny when amy just kept going "well he didnt mean that, he must be doing this" thing. Though I feel sorry for her but sonic is a playboy in the archie comics. Excellent Story.

Good stuff, amy is always in such denial its sad.

I haven't even finished reading the first chapter, but I was halfway through and fell in love with that writing style!

Excellent! *faves*

I wonder how many potential readers began the first chapter without detecting the undercurrent of sarcasm. And I say undercurrent, but perhaps 'torrent' would be more appropriate, your tone was anything but subtle.

It didn't bother me, of course, given my pairing proclivities. And having been already familiar with your work I found it doubtful that you'd allow Amy to get the guy. I imagine you must be enjoying the new future Mobius arc in Sonic Universe, assuming you've read it.

Characterization was interesting. I felt like I was seeing Sonic X-Amy interacting with SatAM-Sonic. Not quite their Archie counterparts, but further from their Sonic Adventure outings.

A well written and interesting character study.

well i'll be honest, although i hate Sonic from archie comics...you did excellent on protraying their relationship)

At i was angry at sonic bringing up Sally but then it all worked out.

Interesting story, I thought something was up with Sonic's actions through the whole story and you gave that feel that it wasn't going to be a full romantic ending.

I really enjoyed it, you got Sonic and Amy's relationship perfect.:

You finally right a story about the true sonic cuple. I was always mad when you rote the other stories that had sonic and the bitch sally togethear, maybe you could go back and corect those stories. You should also fix how OC sally is in this story, you have her as to nice, you need to fix it.

Well now. I see this ending rather badly. For Amy anyway. It's really well written, and you've nicely captured how crazy and delusional Archie-verse Amy is portrayed 90% of the time.
That said, and the way you keep this in tune with the characters, I can't imagine this turning out well. It's a really interesting scenario, but it's already obvious that the truth is going to really shatter Amy's hopes.
However, for the Archie Sonic, that's about all something like this would ever amount to, unless the comic takes quite a change of direction.

All in all, very well done.