Oh, I hope you're planning on updating this. Just found it and loved what you've done so far, and can't wait to see how you get Jack and Ianto back together again.

huh. intersting start. i would like to see where you go with this, and to find out how the Doctor saved ianto. but htere's one thing, that i dont think ianto would act quite like that. at least, he wouldnt tell them he had died. that's not exactly something you tell people you dont even know, however helpgul they seem

I so love the idea of a Torchwood/SG-1 x-over PLEASE write more. I want to know when and how Ianto will meet Jack again and how the two Jacks will react to each other. PLEASE update again!

Great story so far, can't wait to read more!

Sarah x

Very cool begining! When are you going to update? Can't wait!

Suzie

This is a really interesting concept, I like the two different but when you think about it slightly similar Jacks, and the friendship between Ianto and Daniel. It seems to fit - they have very similar temprements. I'm not so sure about calling Daniel "Danny", but I think it will work if you make sure to keep it away from cutsie descriptors around it. I also like how open Ianto is with Daniel and Jack from the beginning, in contrast to how secretive he was with Torchwood. It's very refreshing to see Ianto open up to someone different. My favorite aspect so far is the integration of the coffee into this story - there needs to be constants in crossovers, and you have picked a brilliant one. Looking forward to more to come,
O.

Hmm, Daniel's a lot more physically affectionate with Ianto than he usually is with people.

Ooh, lovin' it! I couldn't stand it when Ianto died, and I'm so glad to see you brought him back, using the Doctor, no less! You really should keep going with this!

Fantastic!,
Red

good start, but how is ianto now 8 years in the past and will we see jack. please update soon and keep up the good work.

interesting start. waiting for more