 LADYMALLARD 7/29/09 . chapter 1This was a neat little story, with Darkwing and Morgana, each making compromises to please the other. The spaghetti thing was fun, with Drake making quite a production about cooking it, but I could tell that each of them felt a bit awkward when it came to eating it. Gos and Launchpad were right on, I always chuckled at Gos's monster movie watching and ofcourse at Launchpad's reaction, every time they went to the movies, featuring said monsters. The cookie baking scean at the end was terrifically funny. I could just visualize them having fun baking together. Great job overall. Till next time. |
 Irual 7/28/09 . chapter 1WO HO!
this is so cute and it is kind of cool that they are making COOKIES!
speaking of which this happy little gem gets it's owm 11 cookies, 2 cocolate chip for the lunch scene. (having Gos all sleepy and waking up for lunch was too funny.
2 sugar cookies because you had Morg try spegehetti great choice BTW
2 mint cookies for having them decide to combo Monster ingredients and Normal ones... My fic have them do that to, Morgana eventually publishes a Neuvo Monster Cuisisne Cookbook-D
2 for dialog and having DW still admit to his doubts AND having Morgana make such a concerted effort ob his behalf
and the final 3 are Morgana's own army ant surprise cookies One for Gos and LP, one for Archie, Eek and Squeek to share and one for DW Morg to eat.
it's easier to eat the flying cookies when you have help to catch them after all.
PS the whole chapter is accedently underlined but other than that it is easy to follow and the characterisations are good.
I really am enjoying this THANK YOU so much,
If you ever have any requests just sing out and my muse will head on over to my plot bunny ranch and start the fur balls rolling your friend Irual
PS I can't WAIT for the next bit I am so excited it's like christmas in july! woot! |