Even after all this time, I still love this story. So beautiful. Everytime I read the lasr two chapters, I shiver just a bit. It is jut simoky amazing. I love it.

Hello, I really liked your fic, I like the couple TykixAllen, but I liked it all, good keep it up, thanks and kisses.

No happy ending?! D:

Very beautiful story, although (maybe) a little rushed.
I enjoyed reading every little bit of it. :-)

*rocking back and forth* I can't anymore. I just can't.
Oh my goodness, this was the most amazing thing I've read in such a long time. At the beginning, I felt it was a little cliche, but as it went on... it turned into the best, most heart-wrenching love story I may have ever read.
I may be overreacting due to the ending of the final chapter and the fact that I'm sobbing, but I really feel like this was... to put it simply, astounding. Enchanting. (As said before,) Heart-wrenching.
I LOVED IT.
May I say that the use of a romantic language such as Portugese (and not to mention the fact that you used Tyki's ethnicity to the best of your ability) made this a lot of what it is? It felt like... I can't even describe it, I'm sorry.
To sum it up, I could feel every little thing Tyki and Allen felt, and I experienced it fully. The use of Portugese only added to this story's feeling, and I have to say I fell in love with the closing paragraph of chapter six. Every part of this story was beautifully written.
Well done.

it was hard to understand at times because of the different language but i enjoyed it completely. the other language made it feel more real. i just wish you had added more translations at the end of each chapter. you kept me up 2 hours past my bedtime because i simply had to read it all in one go

I think you should make a sequel even though your going for the more professional side of things. I love to see how tyki reacts when he wakes to find Allen missing... :) Then they should meet later. . . That would be so cool maybe amusing...

Very lovely story! Very yummy also! Could easily do with a sequel set a few years later :)

wao i read it again. so good.

Awwww your story was really good ( yeah I already finished all the 8chapters xD ;; ),
And don't worry, I'll rape you xD ( not sure yet if it's just an unseen mistake or if you did put that on purpose xD : "A/N: EVERYONE, I AM SO SO SORRY! Life has been so busy lately, I lost track of how long my hiatus was! I will not wait so long to update the other chapters. Please rape, review, or do what pleases you." )

WOW, this was worth the read, short and sweet, but extremely sad... reminds me of romeo and juliet in a way.. -cries- man, maybe i should go read some tyki/allen AU or someth lol.. im so depressed right now. xD

i loved this - goodjob!

omygod, im crying so hard right now ;_;

WOW, i loved this chapter! like even though tyki is evil [ :( ] everything jsut reminded me of like, idk, a fairy tale. a princess watching the prince with the town folksmen xDD

Beautifully amazing!

Wahh the ending was too tragic!