This is Linda from the board. Let me first say that I am very impressed Nic. I thought your characterization was excellent. As of right now, I don't have time to read the other two chapters but I will get around to it. I'm really into the story right now. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. P

(This is my review for all of Mosmotsane and Mysteria 1-4
I love it. I really like the story and Kesi. Keep going.

One thing I don't like is the Idlabmar name. I realized it was rambaldi backwards the first time I saw it and was hoping the characters would see it and call him Milo (olim backwards) or something. Just because when I read I basically say the words in my head and I don't like how Idlabmar sounds.
Ash

hey there nic! wow, this is great! i've never watched Alias before, but i saw a commercial. LoL that's not exactly the same thing tho. i'll probably read more, but right now i can't. so i'll talk to ya later!(oh, i have one new entry up, but you might want to wait til i have more to make it worth your while! ciao!

Sweet! Cool! Really neat! AND THERE'S MORE! Yea! *claps excitedly* Yea! Oh, wait, I'm wasteing time! (Faiding) Now, let's see the sequal was...

Ahhhh! That was so da-I mean stupidly SHORT! Not Fair! Neeeeeed MORE!

like it! who is she? *goin to next story* nice job!

great job for writing the whole thing all in one sitting I especially liked your use of flashbacks, they were very effective and didn't slow down the pacing of your story at all. nice piece!

...I would review, but I don't know anything about Alias, the show only starts next week for the first time here in the UK. Grrr, I hate it when that happens *fumes
Will come back when I understand it all a little better

Yes, why are they splitting up? You can't do this to me! We need *longer* parts! *cries* But no, on the other hand, thanks for reviewing my fic! *g*

very good post more soon

o0o0o0o0o0o0! suspense! i cant wait! -

Uh oh. Not good. MORE! Yes, yes. Need more! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! _

More soon please!

Please tell me it's the CIA! *g* I'm sitting on the edge of my seat here! And no, it didn't occur to me to look for anything unusual in Olim's name until you said it. *Then* it was obvious.)

o! make it cia and sydney ditches k-directorate and then her n vaughn kiss! lol! i luv ur story so far! its really good! lol! great job