A great story. Very well written.

oh my gosh..i love this version..i think the yule ball scene is one of my fave scenes in the 4th movie (which happens to be my second fave movie lol)..neways the way you led up to it with fill-ins we never witnessed in the movies was awesome...we got to see some great, extra ron/hermione moments which i loved..awesome way of showing his jealousy