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| Reviews for The Razgriz of Sand Island |
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   nappyrash8 5/1/13 . chapter 1If you would allow me I would love to use this story as a base and try and rewrite it with my own touch, and of course credit would be given to you as necessary. It is such a great story but I feel like I would like to expand it a tad more. Please PM me on this matter as I can't PM you yet, first fanfiction story I've ever read and this is a massive success! |
| Guest 4/7/13 . chapter 18 good story keep it up |
| BygoneSamurai 3/20/13 . chapter 1 I haven't read the other reviews but i think there are extra "but"s in this part: "Without someone to guide me, I'd get lost but quick, and but good." Great job though, i can't wait to read the rest. |
| Dracconnis 3/20/13 . chapter 18 Loved it!an excellent work |
| Guest 3/7/13 . chapter 17 You should describe more air combat maneuvers. For example, like Zorro118 does on The Aces of Razgriz. |
| Guest 3/5/13 . chapter 17 Great Chapter. I wonder how the aces will react to Chopper's death and how they will fair against the 8492 Squadron. |
| Guest 3/5/13 . chapter 17 I think that you should make a movie out of this story when you finish posting it on fanfiction. I know this would be very difficult to accomplish. However, you should use the same lines as in The Razgriz of Sand Island. The movie, if you decide to make it, would probably be a great one if you do this. |
| Guest 3/4/13 . chapter 17 I very much enjoy this story, but I think you need to make an update ASAP, because fans of this story arebeing kept in suspense for too long |
| Guest 2/28/13 . chapter 17 please update soon |
| ace-mrkos 2/28/13 . chapter 17 Hey, keep up the good work. I really can't wait for mission 19 (escape from Sand Island). I'd like to see Talisman make a cameo (maybe as a child?). |
| Guest 12/19/12 . chapter 17 cool chapter keep it up |
| LaniusLegioXIII 12/13/12 . chapter 17 Long time no see, hahaha; keep updating, this is a very unique story using a lot of characters. I also love your references lol. Peace. |
| Magsmp 12/11/12 . chapter 2 Love this story and I hope you can continue soon |
| Cartoonny 12/10/12 . chapter 17 Great job so far, but just one note of criticism. The crew of the gunship that went to rescue Nagase but crashed, you wrote that they were killed on impact, but in the actual game, they survived. There was a cutscene after you rescued Nagase in the next mission where she had the crew of the gunship beside her while she held some Yuke soldiers at gunpoint. Just wanted to point that out. Great job otherwise, though. |
| Dracconnis 12/10/12 . chapter 17 Excellent work!loved it |
