|Reviews for X Marks the Spot|
| Black-Dragon-Fairy 4/10/13 . chapter 1
| kmfroggi 10/26/12 . chapter 1
why is it that you always have the most embarrassing moments in front of people like emmett! haha. great story!
| MamaJoyof3 3/13/12 . chapter 1
| blb1000 4/10/11 . chapter 1
Well written. I was a little surprised by their romp in bed - for 2 shy people. Would have been a surprise if it ending with something like, "... and then I heard the front door open."
| SamMomo 12/21/10 . chapter 1
NIce little story!
| diehardtwilightfan23 9/20/10 . chapter 1
Awww... But what an idiot for not talking to her for years!
Haha loved the story tho
| maggiejoma 1/17/10 . chapter 1
love the story... loved the tats too... love your writing...:)
| xoxocullenluverxoxo 12/14/09 . chapter 1
This was so freaking amazing! i loved the hole aspect of the waitress thing! i loved it!
| wytchwmn75 11/29/09 . chapter 1
Wow, that was a great O/S. I really loved it. I know its 4 months late but I just found it on your profile. I would've begged for you to expand it if I had read it sooner!
| DaniUberAlles 11/14/09 . chapter 1
Oh my Edward. The use of the movie quote was classic. Had me a smiling the whole way.
LOVE this Emmett. What an ass, yet still pretty hot I must say.
They reminded me of these two brothers who I went to school with, and that def. brought a smile to my face!
| EagleGirl12 10/13/09 . chapter 1
| cravingtwilight 8/18/09 . chapter 1
“Dude, if loving cheesecake is being girly, then let me grow some boobs and die happy,” Emmett said, winking at me again.-bahaha, oh Em! :)
I turned on my heels to head towards the drink station when a kid at a nearby table swiped his arm out, his plate of spaghetti flying off the table and onto my all-white server’s outfit. I slipped on some sauce and landed flat on my butt in the middle of the aisle.-oh god! lol
“My devil,” he whispered into my ear, his teeth tugging on my lobe. My body erupted into shivers. “My angel,” he breathed, his tongue running across the angel wing.-hot!
| jennayg123 8/9/09 . chapter 1
Loved this story! Edward is so cute and sweet!
| aleighy 8/3/09 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this one-shot. I wish it was longer and had more details about things they talked about at the table and while walking home. Also, definitely more details from the bedroom...I think that scene could have been much longer...but all-in-all, it was well-written and I loved the tattoos. Great idea!
| BamaBabe 8/3/09 . chapter 1
My devil... My angel... your heart...
Love it! That seems like a beginning, not a one-shot ;)