How interesting. "shut up I'm thirsty." Oh boy.

haha a very good story with a very good ending!

Nice, very nice

Nnngh! X-D Cracksmut, I don't think I've ran into that genre here before...

I got here while looking for how different folks see Suigetsu. Interestingly enough, he seems to be quite a popular smut character from my impression so far.

I liked the touch of how "you can't play mind games with a Yamanaka". It would've been fun to see that played out even more. She seemed somewhat playable when it was Suigetsu playing though, judging by the tears and all. ;)

Minor nitpicks: Some paragraphs in dialogue had the ending periods missing ("I ask", "I mock" and "he retaliates", etc). Towards the end of the story it suddenly shifts from past tense to present tense and back. "the memories just came flooding back and I stare ... he lifts ... he licked etc." Finally, "I lost my dignity when I was captured" sounded a bit strange to me, is it really dignity you've lost if you're not shy or care anymore?

Thanks for this!

Very good one ! :D

That was nasty! But funny. That is some imagination you've got there.