I think you did a great job writing this. I think you hit every note perfectly and I hope to read more from you!

-.- hmmmmm, I'm not entirely sure what I think of this fanfiction, but it wasn't too bad all in all I guess.

Great work with this! It was extremely well writen and I enjoyed reading it!

PAUL! NOOOOO! Oh my gosh, this was written so well, and I read it so avidly till the very end, and I was still clinging to a bit of last hope, because the ferry boat and the kiss and... GAH! Why do they have to move in front of him? He'll be tortured and forced to move, but he'll still be aloooone!

...But great job writing this. I liked how it tied together from section to section.

Wah!

the ending was so sad!

But very awesome!

I didn't like it...I LOVED it!

I really don't want to write a review due to laziness but this is just too amazing not to. :3 You did a truly spectacular job of keeping everyone in perfect character. I commend you on it. Now, laziness takes over...z...z...z, xD

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Aw... Made me cry. DX Paul, you need a hug!

Paul:"..."

Me:-Hugs him-It's okay...

Dawn:HEY!

Me:-Runs off-BYEE!

Aw, this was really sad. Made me teary eyes. ;.;

Great job on this. :)

Well, I read this a few months ago and never got round to reviewing, but when I went searching for it again to give the link to my friend I decided to review D

And I loved it blatantly, else I wouldn't have given it to my friend. I can't even write something like this in borad daylight, never mind at 3AM o.O

I love the little, 'she never looked back,' and, 'she made all the right mistakes,' things, they're touching :]

It's amazing, someone who actually knows where brackets can be used properly ;D. Anyway, you're amazing, I loved it, as I've already stated. 33

Wow.

That made me cry.

It doesn't take much to make me teary, but it takes quite a bit to make me sob.

I'm a big Paul fan, and I really really want to hug him right now.

You're a beautiful writer, it's so mature, absolutely wonderful. I'm so glad I got referred to this. You're amazing.

This story is insanely amazing.

It's so deep. So.. so, deep. Oh gawd. You're a genius.

Wonderful story. I love the whole thing. 3

I would have never been able to write a story as great as this at 3 AM. xD

I... aw! :3 I love the shippings, I love the style of writing, I love the whole thing overall.

TWINLEAFIKARI?

Oh wow. I see this style a lot in other fandoms, but never Pokemon. So awesome job for

1. Writing pokemon angst

2. Writing Ikarishipping and

3. Using proper grammar and spelling while you're at it.

It made me so sad, in that good way, and this is honestly, the best Pokemon fanfic I've read so far (I'm more of a Naruto person) I'm a sucker for angst and especially this style.

Great job!

GREAT STORY! I LOVED IT! I feel in a way sorry for Paul, not having a significant other. It's obvious Paul loves Dawn but she's with Barry. I'm not even a Twinleafshipper and I loved it.

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