 Rasa Rainboweyes 2009-12-01 . chapter 12Aw, sweet. Domino, nice name. Anyway...
Save the cheerleaders... or save the world.
Hee hee hee. Definitley a brilliant line. And really I could totally see Blaze burning down Old Trafford if she had an excuse to. Well wouldn't we all? Then again it'd probably just mean they'd get a new stadium or, heaven forbid, they'd share ours!... Nah, like we'd let them play on ours, they can go borrow some non leagues side's pitch. Wow I've gotten off topic here. Great story, even though I didn't review as much as I probably should. Sorry will try better with the next one... speaking of which... Time to read the next adventure!
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 mandya1313 2009-11-23 . chapter 12very nice |
 Certh 2009-11-23 . chapter 12Really... bright ending! So full of optimism! |
 mandya1313 2009-11-14 . chapter 11cool |
 Certh 2009-11-14 . chapter 11Ah, it's getting more interesting! Did I mention I love your descriptions? It makes everything 3-Dimensional!
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 mandya1313 2009-11-08 . chapter 10cool |
 Rasa Rainboweyes 2009-11-08 . chapter 10Nice. Of course City won. Glad someone understood how important a City vs Chelsea match is other than Blaze. Anyway poor Michael Hawley, still bring on Shockwave! No really, she's so much fun, she should totally be brought in. Can't wait for more, though I have a suspision you held out on this chapter until I reviewed. Sneaky.
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 Certh 2009-11-07 . chapter 10Entertaining chapter, what with the team squabbling who's in charge and the Gambit-Aragorn comparison. Loving it! |
 Rasa Rainboweyes 2009-11-07 . chapter 9Oh. Looky! I am reading and reviewing, stop complaining at me! Anyway, very cool. Seriously, very, very cool. And I can really see Gambit giving up school, so very him. Anyway, will read more if it's posted promise! Anyhow, lots of fun, needs more X23 though.
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 mandya1313 2009-10-25 . chapter 9very nice |
 Courtney Summers 2009-10-25 . chapter 9intresting, and i liked x-23 in the story also. |
 mandya1313 2009-10-12 . chapter 8cool |
 mandya1313 2009-10-07 . chapter 7cool |
 Certh 2009-10-07 . chapter 7Gripping chapter! Can't wait for the next one. |
 mandya1313 2009-10-01 . chapter 6cool |