I really did love that story! Aw! wowowowowowowowow! sorry bout that, but I trully like things like that.

Anyway, i've got to go at the moment! bi bi luv Hayley!

Several years after it's posted...

:o)

Interesting fic. Nice change from the normal plotless crap that people write...

And please ignore all of your flamers. It's not like the fic takes place in the 1800s where pre-marital sex is a huge shocking deal... I mean, Sirius goes off and sleeps with all of his girlfriends in nearly every fic, yet Lily and James can't, when they're going to get *married*? And excuse me, but look around high schools now days. Are people that naive that they think that even freshmen aren't occasionally having sex? It's BS.

Nice job, and I'm off to read more of your stuff!

(Probably won't review more, but I just wanted to comment on the flames and tell you it DOESN'T suck.)

WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? TALKING ABOUT GIRLS' PROBLEMS LIKE THAT?

AS YOU MAY NOT HAVE NOTICED, LILY AND JAMES HAD HARRY *AFTER* THEY WERE MARRIED! RETARDED! ALSO, LILY'S LAST NAME WAS *EVANS*!

Have a nice day. *sarcastic smile*

Good job but I think it sould kinda be PG13 because James was like "but but it was only that one night..."

I thought it was funny, yes I know it wasn't supposed to be.

Really nice, though it was weird with Lily proposing and all, but... cool anyway

wow. really tight. never thought Lily would propose...nonetheless...great fic :)

cool well cya

hahaha! That was sooo cute! id be like, "Girl get up, thats my job man!"

Really goood!

that was so cute.

awwwww. That's sweet.

Good job-I loved the story!

short, sweet, but great!

I love this! Espescially after seeing a talk show with guys who claimed they weren't peeps dads, it was so sweet to see James stick by Lily. It was really good, really deep. Serena

I think this is very good. It's interesting to write about what would happen if Lily was pregnant before they got married. I enjoyed reading it, and I wish it wasn't so short.