Interesting start. Am excited to read more.

Woaah this story has great potential! And by great I mean monster-sized potential! Plus, some allspark!sam never hurt either. ;] Can't wait for more, thanks!

So far this story has a very interesting twist on the All Spark Sam device. You've got a talent for writing things clearly. I'm eager to see what else you have in store for it. What happens to Sam? Given the chapter name 'Ambush' I wonder if he's alright, although I guess if Bumblebee didn't see him at the college the next morning then something didn't go right. Who texted him and for what purpose?

I also like the "Oh no. Oh no no nononono" part, it's something I can totally hear him saying in the movies (probably because he did, like when he thought someone was stealing his car :p).

All in all, you've got a great start to the story going on and I'm going to be very happy to see it updated. :)

Okay you got my attention now. What happened to Sam? I can't wait to find out. Good story.
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lol me again, just wanted to say this chapter is awesome too

wow this fic has me really excited! your a very good writer and this seems like a very original and entertaining story line. I love it! it flows nicely, it has some good humour in it and its very realistic with sams feelings/reactions and things. the whole sam as the spark concept is extremely new but im sure ill love what you do with that too!

O, and here I was thinking Sam had got away. But seriously, he was a little slow on the uptake there. Update please?

I like the story so far. Update soon.

this is interesting one.. can't wait to know what will happen next~!

awesome story please update soon

Interesting...hope to hear more soon!

Intriguing! Well-written and interesting. I look forward to finding out what will happen next...

Oh so interesting! What happened to Sam! Can't wait for an update.

Geh. *wibbles* Where's Sam?

An interesting take on this. I look forward to seeing where you take this.