I love this story so much! <3 It's so cute seeing Baby John on a date :)
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This is really my #1 favorite fic. It's funny and cute and adorable and hilarious and just really a great fic. It's way more well-written then anything I could ever write. Great job!

Haha oh wow this is v. funny, and sweet as anything!
I love that finally someone decided to write a fic that showed Baby John and his romantic life, in all its awkward, endearing wonderfulness!
Oh to have been Minnie in this...But I have to confess I hate the name! Bleh, Anyway...great story. Hope I can be as good as you are.

This was a cute lovable first date

As always, I loved it! It was totally something Baby John and Minie would do! I also loved the hint of Anybodys/A-Rab!

adda--wibba--i can't even pick out parts because I AM LAUGHING SO HARD. it will be all your fault if i choke on my food!!

everything was fantastic, and these only represent a few of the lines i loved so very, very much:


“Daddy’s very protective,” Minnie filled in for him, slipping her hand into the crook of Baby John’s elbow

Baby John was glad when Minnie said she didn’t want any popcorn; he had heard that girls hated getting popcorn at the movies, because it always made the boys’ hands slimy and gross to touch.

Not five minutes had passed before a sound like a plunger unstopping a toilet arose and A-Rab swore as he pulled back from Bernice.

“How ‘bout you keepin’ it down, daddy-o?” Anybodys asked in a scathing voice, smirking as the implication hit A-Rab and he flushed. “I can hear ya from all the way up at the top.”

Anybodys rolled her eyes. “Yeah, because it’s my life’s ambition ta get groped in the middle of an Alfred Hitchcock movie. Ya sound like apes, ya know.”

Minnie swung their joined hands lightly. “Well, we girls act kinda dumb when it comes to boys.”

And then her words registered with him. This was the part A-Rab had told him about. The girl always said, “I had a great time tonight,” and then the boy was supposed to kiss her. Baby John licked his lips. “Yeah, I did too.”

Baby John glanced up at a very disgruntled Officer Goddard, who was glaring down at him. “There better not be any hanky-panky between you and my little girl! I KNOW WHERE YA LIVE, JOHNNY-BOY!”


dahaha i adore you, and i adore how well you know these characters, and i adore this fic! it is PERFECT, do not change a thing!