Ah, I love Richie's thought processes in this.

i really like it. update soon.

Ahahahaha. I love Rich. He is just too funny. And AWESOME STORY! Can't wait for the second part! =D

lol! You posted this on my birthday! Virgil is so very oblivious...But cute to see him so reverently lovestruck with Daisy and Richie so manically lovestruck with Virgil.

OMG I freaking love this! At first I was gonna get all up in your face being like "Where's my update for Disambiguation **" BUT I've decided to go easy on you. (I know, I know I am just SO nice.) I can't wait for the second part of this! You always keep the boys in character while at the same time showing there pretty much obvious love for each other! Haha the Daisy part was perfect, he'll never admit it out loud, but Richie gets insanely jealous over her. (I'm not mental, the proof was all over the cartoon!) I can't wait for you to update, please make it soon!

Cheers,
Fangirl66

PS
Don't think I'm letting you off the hook because you wrote a really good story! I still expect a Disambiguation update! :P

This was wonderfully funny. At points even campy_I laughed out loud at parts--great humor. Lovin' the Richie one-upping the '**' Daisy. When you had him so over the top that Virgil started laughing--that was funny-funny=that's twice as funny.
The parts with Richie admiring Virgil's well muscled, sweat drenched body was very descriptive as was the model shoot-your photographer was funny. The line about Virgil having plenty of sexy and juice made me thirsty for his sexy juices.
Richie's mad-scientisty bit was also entertaining. And what a cliff hanger...Virg and Rich nose to nose, breath to lips, holding each other close...I think I'll explode if you don't update soon.
Thanks for sharing another great story.

first and foremost i would like to say how much i enjoy your other fic, Disambiguation (did i spell that correctly?). since that piece, i've thought of you as a BRILLIANT writer/storyteller.

but this piece of work, my dear... well, it was exceptionally wonderful, even if it's merely part one. reason being? out of every VR fanfiction i've read, this one made me giggle and applaud and mutter little comments to myself for than any other. which, believe me, is a high compliment indeed. i love this so much; it's very, very, VERY entertaining. kudos to you~!

i look forward to the rest. ;D

I love this story! Richie is so snarky and plain awesome. Way to use his intelligence, it seems that Richie uses it to flirt with Virgil because maybe it's Virgil's own fetish??


LOL Richie dislikes Daisy tremendously and he tries to placate the situation by overpowering her with knowledge and skill and just a gazillion excuses why he's better. (Acting like a jealous girlfriend)And his "explanation" on hy Daisy's idea on "organic" blends was more like an insult than anything. I really liked that part, because ... well he used what she said and made it a gazillion times better. Which made Virgil amazed at business savvy Richie. It seems that Richie is certainlly marketing Virgil to show his off for everyone to see. That he was even jealous of Daniel.

. There were so many scenes that were my favorite but the best had to be when Rihie train of thoght is reduced to that of what he used to be a regular lovesick high scholar when he sees Virgil's six/eight pack. Well that can make anyone forget.

And you left me wanting to read more especially near the end! I so thought Virgil was going to kiss him

Just awesome! I love how you present these characters! This little story is a wonderful addition to the SS community. Almost as good as your Disambg. (sp. bad) Will there be more to this? Cuz I hope so.

The tangents are just awesome and distracting in a good way. Keep 'em coming!