 darkfinder 11/16/10 . chapter 4to bad there been no updates . |
 red1Rogue 5/20/10 . chapter 5I hope there's more. Nice premise. |
 Mrs Rosemary Weir 1/17/10 . chapter 5Please update! I really like this! Don't leave it alone! |
 Fruitlooped 1/9/10 . chapter 5Please update this soon! I need a decent sparky fix! |
 Viktorija 10/29/09 . chapter 5I really like this ,UD soon! |
 odd ball 9/30/09 . chapter 5 some small spelling erors but come on don't do that i really hate cliff hangers please keep it comeing |
 odd ball 9/30/09 . chapter 4 totaly denile if only he realized this in the show before the end of the episode LIFE LINE huh! oh well that's why we have fanfics hay? |
 Cocoagirl3 8/21/09 . chapter 5Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Elizabeth should have said something before now. Because now John's going to have to play the guessing game on whats wrong unless Elizabeth tells him exactly whats wrong. And If she doesn't John is going to carry her to Dr Beckett and that won't help. She needs to be taken off world to an abandoned planet. And Carson can see her there. I do hope that this will allow them to be open about their feelings and discuss them not just sweep them under the rug. I do worry that if John stays with Elizabeth off world and leaves Teyla in charge of Atlantis then the PTB will make a stink about that. |
 Kathryn0505 8/21/09 . chapter 5This story is so cool! I love it! ] |
 Ros Jordan 8/18/09 . chapter 1Interesting story. can't wait to see what will happen. maybe Elizabeth asking some leading questions to see what he thinks subconsciously? p lol update soon. love it |
 theMightyMrZeus 8/11/09 . chapter 3This is really picking up some momentum now. I can't wait to see where you go with it. I'm curious now about whether John got the spores too or if he's just very observant. |
 bailey1ak 8/7/09 . chapter 1Interesting first chapter. Can't wait to see what the plant has done to Elizabeth. |
 mariatheresia8yahoo.com 8/3/09 . chapter 3 Love this story. Can't wait for the next Chapter. I like Elizabeth and John. |
 lizabeth39 8/3/09 . chapter 3Another great chapter, well done and keep them coming. |
 mariatheresia8yahoo.com 7/31/09 . chapter 2 I really like it and I'm looking for the next Chapters. I liked Elizabetn and John and I wish they would have kept her or brought her back like Carson. |