 J. Liha 4/3/03 . chapter 3HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THESE IDEAS? It boggles the mind... anyway, I love it so far, please update ASAP! |
 Darcel 3/15/03 . chapter 3Very well written. Fred's part almost made me cry... |
 Hopeful Writer 8/4/02 . chapter 3Nobody cares about Ginny's problems. Well, maybe somebody does, but I sure ain't that person. She's like Cho to me: annoying as all hell. Stop doting over Harry, you priss! Actually, she's not really that bad, just a wee bit of a bother. If I had liked Ginny, this would have been another excellant chapter. Since I don't, it's reduced to merely great. Hmm, not bad anyway. Okay, I'm babbling and not making much sense, so I'm going to end this now.
-HW |
 Hopeful Writer 8/4/02 . chapter 2Yay, George got a girlfriend! Sort of. Well, he got a date. I always liked Fred better anyway. But George is cool.
-HW |
 Hopeful Writer 8/4/02 . chapter 1Woah, a suicidal Cho. Too bad she didn't get too follow through. Sorry, she's alright and all, but she bugs me something awful. Don't really know why. But good story. I love Fred's point of view. He's one of my fav characters. Wonder why Cedric's death touched him so much.
-HW |
 sunnycouger 3/23/02 . chapter 3This is great! I loved the Fred and George parts a lot. Who's next? Poor Cho :( I really liked her and Cedric so I was gutted when Cedric died :(
Anyway, this was great! Keep up the good work :)
Marianne |
 AniMourner 2/12/02 . chapter 3 That was so deep. Wow. You should continue, that was a great series of stories. ) |
 Karna Barquist 2/9/02 . chapter 3 very touching. |
 Rae 1/17/02 . chapter 2 Anymore coming? Please carry on writing! |
 Rah 1/11/02 . chapter 2 S'alright. Whose POV is going to be next? Perhaps a professor? |
 rocky 1/6/02 . chapter 2Another well executed chapter. I love how you switched POVs. George and Katie...how cute ;) I hope you're going to write more... |
 rocky 1/3/02 . chapter 1VERY intriguing so far. You don't see many stories like this. I hope you continue it...and with a longer chapter next time ;) |
 MrSmiley4 1/3/02 . chapter 1My main complaint is that it's not long enough, I want to read more ;) Keep up the good work! In particular, keep writing this side stuff so that I can catch up on my writing in the big story! ::whistles innocently::
Brad |
 LizzieDiagon 1/2/02 . chapter 1very nice. |
 Rae 1/2/02 . chapter 1 Awwwww...that was a really good story! Sad, but still good! It was well written! |