This was a sweet little fic. I loved it.

P x

Absolutely love your story and writing style. You have the innate ability to draw the reader into your creation with one chapter. I personally prefer your depictions of E&B - a cleverly written and enjoyable read, as always!

Hi I like this one shot. Are you turing it into a story.

I'm sorry that you feel bad ...but this was terrific!

i got my first tattoo done last week (of an open book!) and you have totally ruined my experiance... ha ha!

thank you for your amazing writing skills and incredible imagination!

iamvamp

This is amazing, I love it so much. I am definitely adding this to my favourites. You have a really good chance of winning. Hope you do !

Love Littlemizzyx

Great story... I like these one chapter ones... Keep up the great writing... :D

That was one hell of a sexy story. Sorry u were up so late writing it but it was awsome story. Are u writing more to this one or was it a one shot?

Miki

OMG Someone get me a fan this was steaming hot lol

Loved it I'm a massive fan of tattoos so this competition is great and i adore this one shot have you thought about extending it once the comp has ended? :D

I liked it. I noticed a few grammatical errors but they do not take away from the story. I always love "bad ass" or tattooed versions of Edward and Bella.

"“Oh god,” I gasped following it with a string of profanities that would put fan-fic writers to shame.

Yes, I read fan-fic, so does Bella, so fuck off."...too funny. :D

Quick question: the Vicky that Rose was meeting, was that the same Vicky that Emmett was meeting?

that was awesome! I was thinking about entering this contest but i only have haf an idea and i only have two days to perfect it...not gonna happen. Anyway, this is amazing and i loved it. I secretly liked James too...but i like him either way...

I hope you feel better. :D

This was a really well written one-shot, you could barely tell that it hadn't been beta-d.

As for your troubles, I know you probably get alot of offers, but if you ever need someone as back up on short notice shoot me an email and I would be happy to help!

courtney_bottrill

Much love,

xx

I loved the story. Thanks.

My favorite in this competition so far : )

I love how Jacob was the gay photographer by the way.