|Reviews for Take My Life|
| Blaze828 1/20/11 . chapter 13
whats going to happen
| ZeLuNatic22 9/20/10 . chapter 13
its kinda confusing but continue it.
| Maggie 5/25/10 . chapter 13
last time I was a bit confused and all but after re-read all chapters I understand...its great story and cant wait for more...hope Alice will be okay...
| jono 5/9/10 . chapter 12
shit utter shit
| Maggie 5/6/10 . chapter 12
oh no...whats gonna happen now? she and three bad guys...nothing good...
| Robbo 4/6/10 . chapter 11
been waitng for this only just had a chance to read it and i thought it was good, only i didnt know who jasper was talking to until further into the chapter i had to recap.
anywho great work again and i look forward to more thrilling chapters.
ps you said we instead of she in the third last line. no biggy i forgive u
your avid reader and critique
| Samat 1/12/10 . chapter 8
wow... you kno when you don't read ti with a hick southern accent for jasper its actually quite good. but that was a funny night and you know it!
| FLYWOMAN 1/12/10 . chapter 9
The apology is really nice. i skipped to this chapter because i wanted to know how it ended (not finished :P) and now i'm reading the whole thing.
| J.K.S.T.X.Y.Z 1/12/10 . chapter 9
You are officilly my face author this story should be published like for real screw stephanie myer you r so much more talented!
| nessie-janie90 1/2/10 . chapter 9
Holy cow Jez...i think this is my favorite chapter so far! GAH the apology broke my heart! YAY!
| Kiki-Leonie 9/19/09 . chapter 8
this is a really good story, so intriguing and different, i really like it. i love the format too... i hope jasper doesn't give up on alice, he knows she needs somebody!
| mrsjwwhitlock 9/19/09 . chapter 8
this is a good story
keep writing please
| BlueSkyMornings 8/31/09 . chapter 7
Well FINALLY he's going to try to help and get closer to Alice again! It's about time! He better still be i love with her!
| nessie-janie90 8/14/09 . chapter 6
YAY! This is really good Jez! so proud of you! im addicted already!
| BlueSkyMornings 8/12/09 . chapter 6
EEWW! James! James is disgusting! Alice and James... ugg. I'm SO glad Jasper was there XD (Why was he there is the question though. Is he like following her for her safety?-not that I'm complaining XD I love all there interactions!) XD Alice and Jasper 3