finnish please

whats going to happen

its kinda confusing but continue it.

last time I was a bit confused and all but after re-read all chapters I understand...its great story and cant wait for more...hope Alice will be okay...

shit utter shit

oh no...whats gonna happen now? she and three bad guys...nothing good...

hey jezzvamp,

been waitng for this only just had a chance to read it and i thought it was good, only i didnt know who jasper was talking to until further into the chapter i had to recap.

anywho great work again and i look forward to more thrilling chapters.

ps you said we instead of she in the third last line. no biggy i forgive u

your avid reader and critique

robbo

wow... you kno when you don't read ti with a hick southern accent for jasper its actually quite good. but that was a funny night and you know it!

The apology is really nice. i skipped to this chapter because i wanted to know how it ended (not finished :P) and now i'm reading the whole thing.

really good.

You are officilly my face author this story should be published like for real screw stephanie myer you r so much more talented!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOX

Holy cow Jez...i think this is my favorite chapter so far! GAH the apology broke my heart! YAY!

Xx Nessie

this is a really good story, so intriguing and different, i really like it. i love the format too... i hope jasper doesn't give up on alice, he knows she needs somebody!

this is a good story

keep writing please

Well FINALLY he's going to try to help and get closer to Alice again! It's about time! He better still be i love with her!

YAY! This is really good Jez! so proud of you! im addicted already!

xx Nessie

EEWW! James! James is disgusting! Alice and James... ugg. I'm SO glad Jasper was there XD (Why was he there is the question though. Is he like following her for her safety?-not that I'm complaining XD I love all there interactions!) XD Alice and Jasper 3