|Reviews for Spark|
| LJ Summers 11/5/11 . chapter 1
Men don't quite have the same feeling about a miscarriage and how it can rend the psyche. Poor Bella. She didn't want to be a mom, but there's something kind of amazing about knowing there's a life inside you anyway.
Edward's guilt will be endless. And if this was how Bella came to be a vampire, her agony might cling as tightly as Rosalie's burdens.
Painful but very, very good.
| twirob 1/4/11 . chapter 1
well that was short and weird ;)
| Lizzie05 3/15/10 . chapter 1
What a powerful drabble. And so sad.
| venti.turtl 3/12/10 . chapter 1
Speaking of fitting a lot of story into a small number of words. Damn!
She cannot cry, so she hums...
I've never been much of a crier. Books and movies get me every time, but when it comes to RL sometimes the tears just won't come no matter how much I want them to. So I can imagine how infuriating that must be. Not to be able to have that catharsis while grieving the lost of a child.
My wedding gift.
The pain that one statement conveys is staggering knowing canon Edward and the guilt he takes on.
I adore this drabble. Thank you!
| kinsano 3/4/10 . chapter 1
Wow! Short but it packed quite a punch-the last three words especially!
| letmesign 12/24/09 . chapter 1
Wow, this is so short, yet so packed. What a tragic thing. I know so many women who have dealt with miscarriages, and I know that it seems like an absolutely impossible tragedy to come to terms with.
Very unique drabble. Thanks for sharing!
| sbgdgt 12/23/09 . chapter 1
Aw! :*( "My wedding gift." nuff said...
| sydneytwilightmum 11/22/09 . chapter 1
I liked it.. it was definitely 'powerful' as one of your previous reviewers said!
Not everything has to be told in a multitude of words!
I'm really loving the gems of work I'm reading on your listings!
| mudpuddledemon 10/28/09 . chapter 1
Powerful and lovely.
| Jasline Devereaux 10/26/09 . chapter 1
Are you going to make this into a shorty story?
I would love to hear more about this.
| cabr 10/15/09 . chapter 1
Very intense! And it shows how losing a baby can tear you apart while your partner stands and watches. It is a very different grieving process. Even more so if you are a vamp. Thanks!
| For the Love of Jasper 9/20/09 . chapter 1
I forgot I was supposed to review this. I loved it, dark, sad and beautiful.
Drabbles are fun - it's amazing the impact they can have with such few words. I found myself thinking about this one after I read it.
| ottiliakubja 9/17/09 . chapter 1
You made me cry with only 10 sentences. Beautiful, but sad.
| ckcpurple 9/2/09 . chapter 1
great job capturing such a heart-wrenching topic. people suffer loss everyday so while some may view it as dark or depressing, i see it as cathartic. very nice keeping true to the characters as well.
| sapphire.witche 8/2/09 . chapter 1
depressing yes, but also well written. Very nice imagery.