Short and very sweet. I really liked it! I have a bad habit of pitying the bad guys in movies so I'm glad someone shed some light on Ralf's character! You did a superb job and I would love if you could write another chapter, possibly? Maybe something similar in Elsa's perspective?

Actually, good FF! Sais is "says"

Another chapter maybe?

It is pretty good.

well i liked it

so nice wrk

the movie is just soo sad and i think that this small drabble sums up that scene wonderfuly good job

I like this it's got feeling and it's consistent with the story. For someone who doesn't speak English as there first langauge thats very good. I know that I've never been that good with different languages. so I have a god respect for you to write something emotioal in a different language other than your first one. It is a bit short I think it could be extended but, meh.

this is very cool :)

Your english is awesome :)

Wow, I can't believe this is your first time writing in english that was so good. Well done. Xox