Very short, but it didn't need more - I loved it! You had Qui-Gon's retrospection down the pat. Great little oneshot. Obi-Wan as the Chosen One always makes me happy!

Ooh, I love this short piece. Very nicely written. Faved!

that was AWESOME!

Wow, it didn't check you page to see if you had written anything more, but this short story is just fantastic.

Not a lot of words but all were used well. He was not dead though he knew his life had ended. No description needed, that says it all.

A great story. Very good.

Short, sweet, and lovely. I don't know what else to say; it's one of those speechless moments.

this fic defines the term; quality not quantity. [although both can be true at the same time] Reading this makes me feel like I've just run an emotional marathon. Wonderful execution and beautifully told. 'Irony' sums everything up in both an understated and eloquent way... [does that make sense?]

Every word was worth reading. I'm definitely going to search for more of your fics.

Awwww! How depressing! Poor Qui, he must be feeling terribly guilty for dumping Obi for someone who wasn't the Chosen One! Great story!

Great story and kind of a unique point of view. I really liked it. Short but so full of feeling and possibilities, or rather possibilities which were not to be.

Very good indeed for a first story in this fandom. Short yet superb and a nice way for Qui-Gon to come to this realisation. Keep up the good work ) GN

Oh my. That was really cool. Wow. I really like this. Short, but sweet. Like my sentences. Well, they're short, anyway. Good job!

damn you! lol i was writing a story and it was basically what you wrote only longer lol you beat me too it!

Another great fic! Yes, Obi-Wan IS the one. :)

That was REALLY Good! I enjoyed it very, VERY much!

Wow, short but powerful! I loved the thought of Obi Wan being the one, and not that rotten kid Anakin.