LOVE the story, it's so cute. if you wanna continue and make it a romance, i would so not be apposed

I love the protective streak that you have Eliot displaying here. It's lovely and sweet, and it satisfies that need I have for a white knight.

And I like how you've interpreted Sophie's character. The clue about how she's an incredible actor when she's conning, but a HORRIBLE actor on stage is so right on. Well done.

Interesting start. I'm eager to read the next chapter.

I'm going to assume that you're going to be continuing this story! I can't wait to read more! Please, update soon!

I really like this story, especially the fact that Eliot's going after the guy, but I don't think he should have or would have told Hardison. That was Sophie's story, and he wouldn't tell it to anyone else without her permission.