Oh wow! That was a great story! I truly enjoyed it. I always love stories about the androids. Nobody writes about them nearly enough. I'm looking forward to reading some of your other work too. Juunana-gou deserves more credit than he gets. So anyway, that was fabulous! A great interpretation. Way to go! Keep up the good work. Ja ne!

that endding confused me

Interesting... Very original concept. I like it! _

Hey thats cute! I wonder what it was like for17 when he blew up with Cell, and when he was in Perfect Cell's body? Cause if you think about it, He would be able to see through P. Cell's eyes because 18 wasn't there. Oh and one more thing, you forgot the disclaimer at the beginning.