AWESOME STORY! UPDATE SOON! i can't wait to see what happens when she sees the past flock there:)

Wow. They r some freaky people...LOL. Hope no else had 2 ever see or hear bout that ( Angel)...they could get tramatized...LOL

damn. if i were kye i'd be pissed off and never talk to the kid Fang. tsk,tsk.

nice chice of song! :) the lyrics sre rlly deep. it's cool and fits the chp.

and the last line... it left me thinking for minutes cuz' i couldn't belive it, but from that letter and when he left, it's difficult to deny that.

gr8 story, i'm lovin' it so far ;)

she wants to move

greatly written chapter. i loved it. but i can't wait for the chapter where future max meets meets current max and fang. i can't wait to see her reaction to him.

gr8 story

how old is Alexa?

if Mickey was 4 years older than her

how come Mickey is 11 n alexa 4?

all the other ages match up with wot u said in this chapter

just thought id ask

keep writin

x

OMG

great story

update soon

gr8

update soon

Aww, so sad... and, really, i dont think its a rated M chapter, its just rreallyy close to being one. lol still, PLEASE update soon!

This chapter is kind of depressing. But it's good. Update soon, please! And update Viva La Vida Loca 2!

I love this, I think that in the next chapter, she should come home to Max and Fang in her bed.

yay! Fluff! Anyway, what about Nudge's son? You mentioned she had a two-year-old, right? Was he with his dad or something?

Anyway, strange that Max (future Max) would choose that particular day to come home late. hm...

wow! real good! cant wait for new chapter!

i feel bad for Angel and Mickey...having 2 hear in ur head that Max and Fang r thinking about doing the deed, and then having 2 run into ur parents room 2 keep them from doing it would be super awkward and sick...lol.

and i didnt think that Future Nudge would have said such a short sentence when she saw them...lol

cant wait 4 the next chapter!

AWESOME! When are you going to get the next chapter up!

plz, update soon!

i've been waiting long and i'm gonna burst any minute w/anticipation! :)

plus hurry, can't wait to read chp. 6