Don't be sorry for the lack of lemon cuz guys, it was hot! It was nice to have an E/B through Ali's eyes. Thanks for sharing, love it :):):)

This was such a good chapter! I really hope you continue it! :)

You should continue the story

love it

It would be awesome if this was a full length story

I had no idea you wrote this. I think there is a full story inside this, based on Bella and Edward's story.

Nicely done, giving us a glimpse through someone else's eyes.

S. :)

Awhh, this is definitely not the first time I've read this, but I had to find it again. It's so cute. I wish it was a whole story!
Their really formal when they speak though, kind of unexpected in high school, but still! I absolutely love this.

I love this and ive read it so many times,I still think it gets better each time :)

I'm stunned that this doesn't have wayy more reviews. It wasn't what I expected! I loved it. Not many one-shots have what this one does, its why I love it. You should without a doubt extend this. I'm begging for more! Is it a possibility?

Amazing story. :) maybe you could turn it into a full story...;)

Aw I love this. So hot.

that was very cute...it would be nice story but it was nice to read lol

Absolutely love this one shot! I never really ask authors of one shots to do this, but I am BEGGING you to continue this or do some kind of chapter/story pertaining to E and B's relationship. I want an Edward and I sure as hell would love to see Edward through Bella's eyes

Pleaseeee :3 It would make my very happy :D

I love this story. I would love if u make it into a full story or even from Bella n Edward pov

I wish you would go farthr whith this story:(