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Reviews for: Alvarna Rhapsody
z
2009-08-28 . chapter 6
A very sweet and well written series of stories with not nearly the amount of reviews it deserves! Looking forward to more. Hoping for more Uke!Kyle, sadly I do have to agree Ray is too sissy to make it happen in that relationship, boohoo.
Kitsune no Tora
2009-08-10 . chapter 7
Adorableness~ XD Ray is so cute.
Kitsune no Tora
2009-08-06 . chapter 6
ZOMG YAY UPDATE 8D *glomps*

You're very welcome, you can always PM me if you don't know what someone looks like. A google search works well too. :P

Barrett has dark brown hair and light blue eyes. You basically described him instead of Kyle in chapter 3. XD

I found one little mistake: "Max pulled the red scarf around Kyle's neck and deftly bound Max's forearms with it." - He's supposed to be binding Kyle's arms, isn't he? :3
Thoughtless7
2009-08-05 . chapter 5
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I love you. ♥

THESE ARE ALL FABULOUS. THEY JUST GET BETTER AND BETTER. XD PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON. XDD

And excuse the caps lock 8D ♥
Kitsune no Tora
2009-08-05 . chapter 5
Aw, poor Jake. But that was so hilarious and squee worthy! I think I might love you now. XD
Kitsune no Tora
2009-08-05 . chapter 4
Aw~ So cute~ I love Ray too. XD I'll admit that I he wasn't the first bachelor I liked (Jake was, then Barrett and then Max), but he has grown on me a lot. He's adorable. <3
Kitsune no Tora
2009-08-05 . chapter 3
Kya~

That was so cute!

Although, Kyle has brown eyes, and his hair is more red-brown than dark brown...
Kitsune no Tora
2009-08-05 . chapter 2
Aww, poor Yue. XD Scarred for life. At least she made something out of it!

You have officially stolen my fangirl heart, I love you for this. XD ♥
Kitsune no Tora
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
You had me right from the start. XD I love this already. I'm going to read some more right now~

You're a really good writer, this flows really well and there are no mistakes that I can see. 8D
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