That was 1 of the best stories i have ever read. You are amazing.

So I kinda like the story a bit, but your sentence structure and spelling, is really throwing me of. I have a lot of trouble reading your story, i really want to but its just really hard, and since English isn't even my first language, it just makes it that much harder :S

I know you made this a long time ago, but I'd still suggest you find some one to correct this one, because i does have a lot of potential. I think it could be much more than it is now, but you have to correct those errors, if you want that happening, because as it is now i cant really read it.. Sorry /

Anyways good luck on your future stories )

sorry but u do know that tsuki means moon right?

Just stumbled on this fic and, even though this is slightly on a tangent, I wanted to thank you for including NejixIno as a side pairing. :) It's really rare and underappreciated.

It was good ,but I lost interest along the think this could be better?Because I sure do.:)

the plot is truly interesting but your grammar and sentence structure had me lost quite a few times. it was really hard trying to understand some part of the story due to the way you write. maybe u should try getting someone to edit your story, but other than that, i can't wait to read more stories about itachi and sakura. good luck on your writing!

Is sakura 32?

Is sakura 32?

This one's got potential, although the sentence structures (and the choice of words) are a bit of a letdown. My suggestion is that you find a beta who can run over this story and make a few tweaks here and there. It works wonders, promise.

Oh I wonder for Sasuke. :c

Thank you this awesome story**

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if i have to compare this story with lady hanaka id say yours beat hers by a landslide but thats my opion and i think its great and original could never predict what was going to happen next you had me on suspence. also didnt put itachi as a differnet person and i respect you for that well itachi is well itachi hes full of surprises. your wrighting has inspire me to write my own story and post it thank you for letting me see a differnet side of naruto. i like it better than show show just violence and avenge theres no romance still like it but liked your way better wish you could be the writter for naruto cuz u sertainly spiced up naruto.

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You make Sakura's humor perfectly morbid and hilarious.