|Reviews for Marked|
| dreaminofforks 8/1/09 . chapter 1
um...so, yeah...wow. that was really fucking hot. please to be continuing this story!
| rchpbabe 8/1/09 . chapter 1
this was really hot!i would like to see this continue!much love!
| RedVelvetHeaven 7/31/09 . chapter 1
I left this for Naelany too but wanted to share my love for this story with you too!
This was so amazingly hot! Insanely smart! Completely clever!
So many one shots shoot themselves in the foot by giving it all up, then bringing it to a close. But this one is so set up to just keep going! :) And now that I know you will keep going...OMG I'm jumping up and down like a little kid! :)
And can I tell you how excited I am for these two? I mean, E has a Ph.D., seems to be totally brilliant, loaded, HOT and Inked! And J...holy hell! E said it best...
"Fuck me. Mr. Impossible rides a motorcycle."
Oh yeah, and this...
"I could clearly see his nipple rings through the thin white t-shirt he was wearing. The dark shadow of his tattoo spread out in the place over his heart, and a braided leather necklace rested against his throat, an ornate silver slide just over the hollow I wanted to lick." GAH! *THUD*
Ok...back up, dusted off, and ready for more!
Bring 'em on bb's!
Thank you for making my Friday absolutely fabulous!
| ahizelm 7/31/09 . chapter 1
You are aware that I enjoyed this.
Also, not to be weird, but next time Eddie fantasized like this, can I be a fly on the wall? YES, I just said that.
K that's all.
| Sergeant-Politeness 7/31/09 . chapter 1
i love love love your story tatoos worlds best aphrodisiac...anyways your story my favs list happy me and you
| Famingo 7/31/09 . chapter 1
Poor Edward! Getting all flirty and then thinking that Jasper is off limits. The photo session was great! I love sassy Jazzy. He's sexy! The boy's tats sound amazing. I'd love to see the fractal phoenix. You ladies are going to continue this wonderful story after the contest, right? *bats lashes and gives big puppy dog eyes* Fantastic as always ladies! SC, great jump into the slash pool. Glad you joined us here, the water is always great!
| b3j02 7/31/09 . chapter 1
Good luck in the contest ladies!
| ickaren 7/31/09 . chapter 1
Oh, that was UST from start to finish! I would love some more to this story, if you are inspired to continue... it is awesome.
| ADSigMel 7/31/09 . chapter 1
Oh, dear. I noticed that this story is labeled "Complete." Surely that's a mistake, right? Right? 'Cause you're obviously going to continue this super-hot super-awesome story, right? I mean, I don't read a lot of slash, but this was just AMAZING! Please continue the story!
| Ironic Twist 7/31/09 . chapter 1
Yeah, but is he or isn't he?
Make it a two shot ladies and let us know when the voting is done.
| GreenEyesG 7/31/09 . chapter 1
That was one of the best one-shots I have read in a long time! Kudos! You should really think of continuing this on. I loved it!
| stupidlamb79 7/31/09 . chapter 1
Wow...just wow. that was awesome and hot and just pure win. please please please done leave us hangin and continue it. I loved it!
| robownsme 7/31/09 . chapter 1
That was a wonderful piece of slash! I can't even tell you how much I want to read about what happens next. Please don't leave us all hanging here. We need to know what Jasper thinks of those pictures. :) Oh and when you had Jasper turn around and start with his belt buckle and zipper I just about lost it right there. Seriously one of the sexiest things I've ever read in all of ff. Well done!
| Dalia907 7/31/09 . chapter 1
That was fucking awesome. I hope after the contest you continue this little story...I'd love to find out what would happen between those two delectable boys!
| knitknitmama 7/31/09 . chapter 1
OMJ! holy hottness will you PLEASE do a follow up for the 'one week' picture visit?