 sachii.ballpoint 2009-11-30 . chapter 1cute oneshot~! I haven't seen anything this cute for a while now, simple and modest XP I'm hoping you write more though~ |
 ALEXISSA2 2009-11-30 . chapter 1LOL Shizuru thought Natsuki was a man, I wonder what could happen if Natsuki didn't reveal her true gender. Interesting one-shot. |
 Kendra Wolf 2009-11-29 . chapter 1I have to admit, I think I am in love this little one shot, although it is kind of personal. I did meet my current girlfriend of 2 years on the internet XD It's nice to see a story like this that is believable. |
 renkhal 2009-10-18 . chapter 1This was good.
I really liked the depth. |
 Zz-Edge-X-Meirouki-zZ 2009-08-26 . chapter 1*stares* i like. *presses invisible button that says "author plz make a sequal* xD |
 Roselia Rose 2009-08-11 . chapter 1Aww this ended up being a really cute story. Loved Shizuru's username, most would have done Kiyohime.
Probably my most favorite thing said in this story, well typed but still.
"And, at the risk of sounding like a pervert… a/s/l? ;)"
This story could totally have a sequel or more chapters, I would so read it. |
 Maary15 2009-08-02 . chapter 1I really like this story, I hope you decide to continue it! |
 jquackers 2009-08-01 . chapter 1The 'Hahaha' made me laugh. I don't know why, but it just made me chuckle a bit. XD
The ending made my heart soar a bit. It was a strong last statement.
Thanks for the read. |
 Sora-Hikari 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Cute. I was rather shocked she lucked out on not seeing any porn or meeting any perverts. |
 Midori-Sensei 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Aw... This was a very cute story. Seems like you could still write a few more chapters to it. Hope you decide to. |
 monzzi3 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Albeit short, I liked this. :) Hope you write a sequel in which the two meet. |
 BloodThornChaos 2009-07-31 . chapter 1It was well written and could easily be continued. Only if you want to though! ^^ |
 Eagle8819 2009-07-31 . chapter 1And as I've mentioned before, it's not ooc. You did a fine job getting in Natsuki's head (without all those angst and scarred galore), and the characterization is fine.
That being said. Thank you for the fic. 8D
- Aki |
 Icy-Windbreeze 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Anytime you want crawl back out from your lovely rock and write another piece ;) |