 Eclectic Butterfly 2009-12-02 . chapter 4Great story! Your take on the characters was one of the best I've read. I can't wait to read some more of your work! |
 Von 2009-11-26 . chapter 4*squeals like an unco fangirl*
ADORABLE!
I love your Prime!Sam. :D |
 noctaval 2009-10-06 . chapter 4This fic rocks my socks. :3
I love Sam's "Whatever." attitude towards human science now that he has the knowledge of the Allspark, and the sort of cross-cultural understanding Hound, Mirage and Sam are starting to develop.
Also, the scene with Mirage and Hound is probably my favorite 'intimate scene' of any I've read in this fandom. It was moving, beautiful and appropriately alien. Brava! |
 5livelaughlove5 2009-09-29 . chapter 4this is realy good |
 Mackon 2009-08-11 . chapter 4Interesting story, I particularly like your take on Sam and the hints about what he knows what it could mean for a real future for the Transformers and the way he's growing up/growing as a character.
Thanks for sharing. |
 firebirdgirl 2009-08-09 . chapter 4Just sped read your fic, LoVe that Skids & Mudflap were duct taped to the rafters! New to fandom, enjoying your fics. Keep up the great work & Happy writing! |
 Iniysa 2009-08-07 . chapter 4Great chapter! Looking forward to more!
Lauren |
 robins princess starfire 2009-08-07 . chapter 4 Brovo! This was GREAT chapter. i mean it was funny and touching. i'm glad the president was able to quickly except the autobots i mean if he didn't he was going to have a butt kicking delt to him by all the humans that know the autobot and i'm sure a couple of readers to. So like i said great chapter the thing with the twins being hung up like that just had me rolling. Update soon please! |
 blue 2009-08-07 . chapter 4 Great story! I can't wait to see what else you come up with! |
 VeronicaD13 2009-08-06 . chapter 4Oh you can't be done! I can see SUCH Possibilities for this! Sam as a Prime! I know it's been done, but you have a different take on this!
I love how he threw the president's decisions back in his face. I'd totally be in the Autobots' corner too if it were me. I love how there is now an understanding of not to ** off the big mechs because they're the only ones that can save everyone's sorry butts from the Dcons.
I really hope you keep up with many many more chapters, either for this story, or in the series.
More soon please! |
 Ox King 2009-08-06 . chapter 4 Fantastic short story. You are a gifted story teller. I hope to be reading more of your work in the Transformer world. |
 saraane 2009-08-06 . chapter 1 I love this! I wish you would write a little more on this fic before putting it away but I am glad you will be playing with the universe a bit more.
You write a very good convincing Sam and I loved the President speach!
Keep up the great work! |
 Harm Marie 2009-08-06 . chapter 4I liked this and I hope to see more of this universe. |
 Jenniyah 2009-08-06 . chapter 4ah no.. this is complete :(
aww, hope to see more
that bit with the twins is great :)Too bad they cannot leave them there longer :P haha |
 robins princess starfire 2009-08-06 . chapter 3 neat... I like it! This is kind of the way you think things would have really happened after the movie. And im not going to lie its kind of interesting. I'll be watching this one. So good story and update soon please. |