|Reviews for Bella and the Other Mother|
| Miss Riley Belle Shadows 12/21/12 . chapter 2
OMG! Here are some ideas. Sh etells ALL the cullens her story. And Whybies part. She changed her name so the other mother woulldn't find her. Her real name is Coraline Marie Jones.
| Louisiana vampir 11/4/12 . chapter 2
You need to continue this story, please. Please,please!
| XxAshvampprincessxX 3/18/12 . chapter 2
IT TOOK ME SOOOOO LONG TO FIND A STORY LIKE THIS! PLEASE CONTINUE! T T
and for ideas maybe if you have bella go back to the pink palace..she leaves edward a note asking him not to come after her...but they don't listen and follow her anyways. they somehow get their hands on the key and end up in the other mother's world which reveals bella's horrible past experinces.
just a few ideas...PLEASE CONTINUE! i don't know if you're on fanfiction anymore...but PLEASE! THIS STORY IS REALLY GOOD!
| Miss Snazzy 3/18/12 . chapter 1
A nice start. I wonder what will happen next...
| invadernae333 3/12/12 . chapter 2
Edward comes in the hall and wybie asks who he is you can take it from there
| Blackcat842 9/29/11 . chapter 1
Okay here goes*deep breath* This is a major OOC fic, Why-were-you-born would probibly NOT like Bella, he just doesn't seem the type of person to like and, I'm sorry to bust your bubble, a MARY-SUE, don't get me wrong I haven't read your other stories so I can't judge that you are a bad writer, but Twilight and Coraline are two worlds that should NEVER, EVER intertwine!
| lily lupin1 5/8/11 . chapter 2
please update this story! it's good! and do you know how hard it is to find good storys on this site? i'll tell you VERY!
so please update.
| Not In Use 127645 4/12/11 . chapter 2
It's been really really long so I was just wondering if u were abandoning this story. Anyway, if not Update Update UPDATE!
| Heartflower 2/7/11 . chapter 1
Alright pplz I would like to apologize for the review I left. I relize how stupid that was. I mean come on I dont want to bring people down! Although I don't absolutely love this story, I really shouldn't have left that review. I'm very sorry to everyone who read that crappy review. I should never have told the writer to stop writing this story. I do still think that the nickname Jonesy is unessesary. And I do still think Bella is a whiny pathetic person. (no offence to Bella fans). Your writing style is fantastic, and don't stop writing.
| 0bsethed1 1/23/11 . chapter 1
Okay i got curious and read the reviews only to see some BITCHES* OUT THERE apperently didn't like your A-M-A-Z-I-N-G idea for this story and can't deal with the fact that it's called CREATIVE IMAGINATION duh I mean come on your the 1st one who wrote a Twilight/Coraline crossover making it seem even more WOW. The idea is once again as I said amazing and seems extraordinary! I love it not many come out with ideas like yours)Pleace continue and ignore those out there hating especially that ... Heartflower person l You know you can block out ass*holes right LoL they can't PM you or review your story so they stop bitching* about it)The reason people write is to get creative and let other people see their creation and duh this is after all a fanfiction website where nothing is perfect and people just write for the fun of it like me or to practice when they become future writers...sorry I had to write this out and if you delete this review well it's okay with me after all it's your story and all if you want to continue or not)
| 0bsethed1 1/23/11 . chapter 2
LoL I just randomly put Coraline then went to crossovers and typed Twiligt to find this awesome story HA and the only one( Update asap when you can it's the year 2011 and you haven't continued since 2009 *insert pout* PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE IT
I have no ideas for now but I'l try to think of some if I can but for the love of Twilight and Coraline update the story seemed great so far...
.C0raline...my current addiction.
| govolturialecbella 11/28/10 . chapter 2
Great story please keep writing I realy like it.
| AliceCullen3 11/13/10 . chapter 2
You have to bring back the black cat in these story and maybe the Cullens could help out. They are vampires so they would be able to kill the other mother.
| Dark Miko 10/20/10 . chapter 2
this is a great story idea! Bella as Coraline, wonder how the Cullens and Edward will react to what happened when she was a kid. really hope you continue this someday, i'd love to read more
| Heartflower 10/19/10 . chapter 2
OK WHERE TO START!
Bella. Can't. Ever. Be. A. Coraline! First off! Bella is WAY too whiny, whereas Coraline is NOT! Also! Bella's last name is SWAN not JONES so the nickname doesn't really need to be in this story at all! ALSO! Bella is WAY WAY WAY WAY... WAY to pathetic! She could never have defeated a thing like the Beldam! Coraline and Twilight are nothing alike! I don't mean to be mean, but please stop writing! If you continue this story, I will leave another review even longer than this one! Don't get me wrong, you are a really good writer, But plz don't ever ever EVER mix up Twilight and Coraline together. Coraline kicks butt! Whereas Bella sits back and cries. Also! BELLA IS DRAMATIC! And Coraline isn't that much. I do NOT think you should continue this story. And if you keep updating, my reviews will haunt you and your review board throughout the story. Thank you for your time.