Very nice, it captures so much emotion despite it's simplicity.

I usually don't enjoy works like this, but I believe that yours is an exception(:

The dialogue sounds like it came from the characters themselves.

Very nice(:

-Toni (Not Katy)

SOOOO BEAUTIFUL

pmg, i can totally imagine this scene in the book, really. I love it *-*

update soon plz

l love the story it is the best

and l like the way you put things

wow...that was good! A little strange in places...but really good! And so cute! I also loved this part of the movie/novel. I cried when poor Shmuel got beaten up (even though you didn't see it). I really hate Lieutenant Kotler for that ( Anyway, apart from that, you write Shattering Limits? OMG I love that story! Please tell me you'll update soon? It's so gorgeous and cute! The other Shmuel thing is AWESOME! And the bending reality thingo as well 0.o sehr fantastisch! Sorry, you're probably getting bored of my rambling...TWAS AWESOME!

this story was awesome keep writting,sorry i caint add u onto my faves, i forgot my passwrod to my login thing,but once i remember ill add diz story,thanku for writting i love this movie

we had to do course work on this book in school it was pretty good.(giving the fact that Mr Boyne still hasn't replied to our letters)

i think that this was marvellous you really deserve an applause for this!