love this! sooo cute! love heiji sooooooo much!

that was painful (mostly because i can relate). you write very well, good story!

continue it? PLEASE?

OMG, yes! epic cuteness!

I would love to read more of this story and I hope you continue it. This is very good from what I've read so far.

Oh, this was absolutely beautiful. I certainly encourage you to write more, because you have talent. I usually like the pairing, but the way you portray it makes me love it. I particularly liked the character insight. Just one thing;

ito recuperate

1. To recover, especially from an illness; to get better from an illness.

2. (sociology) To co-opt subversive ideas for mainstream use

to reciprocate

1. (transitive) To mutually give and take something; to interchange.

2. (transitive) To give something in response.[...]

/i By the way, it certainly read like pre-slash to me... ;)

I know, i know i already reviewed but couldn't help but to do again. This is such a good story i feel soory that it wasn't finished eventhough you said it will only take 3 chapters, i hope you didn't forget it! if you did then i hope my review reminds you to return to it.

And yes i had to logout to leave another review but i kept the name the same

Aah! I wanna read more! There just isn't enough of this pairing it seems to me. I would love to read more!

you know if i wasn't distracted while reading the story i would've most likely had teared but oh well keep up the good work

Wah! It's so sad... and so true. Poor Hattori.

Ah!

How I would love to see a sequel for this. Because as I'm a Heizuha and Shiran shipper, seeing a Shihei just makes mn day. And I really want Heiji to get his little bit of romance - as in happy romance.

And yeah, it's more than obvious for everyone that Heiji has a crush on Conan/Shinichi, while the latter one is just blind and is aware only of Ran's feelings.

Eh...

So pretty and sad at the end, it was good. . . *nods head*

Usually, I don't do this. I tend to make a habit of completely avoiding in-progress fanfictions, because I've found myself dissapointed when one to many of those fanfics never get continued. But, I just had to read this. Because this pairing is so overlooked, and by the gods you're an amazing writer! I hope you continue! I'll definitly be looking forward to chapter 2 - considering this story subscribed by yours truelly

That's so sad

Oh gosh. It almost makes me ill just how much I LOVE this one-sided paring. And this was SO nice and one-sided...

I can't really give a good review here, since I'm on my phone reading this, not a computer where I can pull up two windows and give a paragraph-by-paragraph review of pleased noises, so just pretend that you can hear my inaudible squeals of pleasure.