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2009-09-01 . chapter 1
I had my doubts at first reading the summary. I was actually offended by it but I decided to take a look and see what you did since I could always hit the back button if it was bad and I have to say that I'm glad it wasn't like the summary implied. This was actually really cute. In case your wondering the reason the summary offended me had to do with the wording which made it sound condescending to same sex relationships. It also makes it sound as though all same sex relationships are just people who are fed up with the opposite sex when they really just don't enter into the equation. Your story is cute and definitely didn't have the message your summary did. I know you might decide to just keep the summary but I have to say that it might turn readers that would normally love your work away. The only reason I decided to read it was that I hoped that you were not serious but if I had been a bit short tempered I would not have read it at all finding the whole thought distasteful. But as I said it did turn out quite adorable and definitely worth the read I just wish the summary wasn't so offensive.
SoraxKairi7
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
Great job.
Newbie
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
Aw!
So cute and fluffy with some sex!
ITS ONE OF MY FAVORITE TYPES OF STORIES!
If you know what I mean by types.
Anyway I like it!<3
Good luck with your other stories, bye!
signed, Newbie
mochiusagi
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
aw that was cute! yey riku finally figured out that he's gay!
Illyric
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
Cute and well written. An interesting position to write a lemon in; nice job.
kittenrock
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
A-M-A-ZING!
loved it!
Peachi Bunni
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
I really loved this. :D It was cute, and heartfelt, and just "aw". C: I love that Sora's so romantic as well.
keysandhearts
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
This was so cute and sweet! I laughed at the summary and chuckled over the obviously girly post-break-up chick flicks and junk food. And of course, my favorite part, the admittance that neither of them had been drunk that night. Thanks for the laugh! :D
Faye Silo
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
nice. =]

Love,
Faye Silo
Innocent KH
2009-08-03 . chapter 1
This was cuute :D
Few spelling errors, but not too noticable and not cringe-worthy. Lol. This story was awesome :P

Bless, Sora must've hurt everytime Riku dated another girl after another. He's so cute :)
kawaii.no.jutsu.
2009-08-03 . chapter 1
So Cute!

I really enjoyed reading this! Good job!
x
2009-08-02 . chapter 1
Heh, love the setting. ;)
Agatsuma Ritsuka
2009-08-02 . chapter 1
Shaavet! Not the best story, really but it's so fluffy XD -gets dentures-
Rose Riku
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
LOL!

So cute!

:D
sana-chan9
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
haahahaa!
they're so cute!
XDD
i noticed some spelling mistakes, but there were only like, 2-3 so it's alright!
:DD
<33
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