Ah, this was pretty funny. I loved all the jabs at Donald, that annoying duck! XD It just seems you took everything Riku had to go through and put it in a humerous life. I enjoyed all the jokes, really cracked me up. I think I'm going to fave this one.

Oh my God.

This was so amazing. I - I can't even. Explain.

I had to bury my mouth in the crook of my arm a few times to keep from laughing because my roommate's asleep.

I just... wow. It's just so great. I love it. Thank you for writing this. Riku's thoughts are so comical and so... wow. *-* Okay, I'll stop now.

Oh my God, that was glorious and unbelievably adorable. Awesome job!

hahahahahahahahaha
totally riku!

This was amazing. I'm at a loss for words. GUH. One of the best Riku/Kairi stories that I've ever read. There were so many great lines, and you wrote Riku's character spot on. I leave the most horrible reviews, but let me end this by saying: it was AMAZING.

This whole story is made of epic and bathed in awesomesauce. Honestly, I was going to point out my favorite parts, but I love all of it so much that I can't! I love it so much! Amazing job, I really wish I had this kind of talent. ^^

--Ali

This pairing seriously needs more love in the house.
And imagine my reaction when I realized that one of my favorite authors actually tackled this.
Yeah, yeah, complete ecstacy.
Who knew that such a story that comes from Riku's pov can be taken so...well, humorously. And a romance story at that. (more like one-sided since the other party is supposedly ignorant [x )
I love all of the inner dialogue, especially the 'this' when they actually meant 'that'.
But most of all, I loved his 'lil adventure stories. Absolutely, adorably hilarious.
Never thought the day would come when I'd associate those words with this kinda kid.

I...

I love you.

This was my first OTP and you somehow made angst hilarious and hilarity angsty and and and

*worships*

Tell it like it is. :)

That was amazing! You really have such a way with words.

Descriptive yet vague. Very entertaining. Keep 'em coming!

Cookies because this pairing doesn't get enough love. Extra cookies because you're such a fantastic writer. The way you captured Riku's adolescent angst was hilarious, but my favorite of the bunch was number two. "No, Riku does not do any of those things. That would not be cool." That line right there is total <3. Riku will always be the token cool guy in Kingdom Hearts, as cheesy as it sounds. Pairing Riku and Kairi together is win. Your writing alone is win.

' Please, she’s twelve, and, Yeah, but she’s hot, to Whatever, I probably have better hair than him anyways, and finally, Oh my god that is the gayest thing I have ever thought in my life '

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EPIC WIN!

Sorry, I just couldn't resist pointing that out...
even though it's obvious.

I found this insanely amusing & adorable & cute & fluffy & awesome & it completely made my day.

Great Job!

=D

[ FAVING ]

I--I--what do I say? Oh my god Ren you are the most amazing person on earth. It's like, Riku/Kairi that's angsty but funny!angsty, if that makes any sense, and I'm just like a;ldkgja;ldfg I don't even know what to say! And now I feel horrible because I don't have your present done and how am I going to compare to this amazing piece of OTP in front of me? Ah, I've missed you and everything and now you give me this and I'm just amazed and stunned and you are the best friend ever and this is totally in my favorites and now I'm going to have to work extra hard on yours and omg I should stop babbling shouldn't I? Grah, I cannot stop smiling and laughing and I love how you make Riku not as cool as he really tries to be, and Kairi doesn't even know how much trouble she's putting him through and it's just so cute, and I love all of Riku's thoughts because WTF Riku, get your head together! XD I love you so much, and thank you thank you thank you! <5

This story was hilarious, even though Mickey means well =), I see what you mean, Riku is int he horrific "best friend role". NO! XD

"It figures that Sora would get the girl and he’d be stuck with a mouse on helium.
A mouse who insists Riku should address him as, Your Majesty, or King Mickey, and starts hitting him when he doesn’t."


That's amazing, right there.