nice story very sad

It actually did seem pretty sad, especially in the two last sentences. It depressed me a little, but thats cool, that just means its pretty moving. The structure of it is different yet perfect and gets the feeling across good.

Freiza! want to KILL Freiza! That Kisama! Freiza Omae o korosu! -Sorry I get very angry and want to kill him as i have said - today we were bowling and i pretended the pins were Freiza, cause I am just that nuts! lol, good fic though, you were right; it was a little short, maybe you could turn it into a big story like how Goku helps him get over it!

Wow, pretty good! The first fic I've read with the mention of VegetaxFrieza and I liked it! Ciao! _

That was, how do you say...? ...interesting...? It kept me well entertained though _

Woah. That was deep. And great. And so so so...sad. But sad can make a story good, ne? Very good.

:piccolo: *shudders* That sounds...wicked.

Dark, and twisted - I LOVED IT! Vegeta is very believable, cute with Goku _ I love angsty fics, especially the dark twisted ones _