Nice story!

Wow either I got softer or you got better! I think It's great how Jack acts like a little kid XD

Lost your abilities? Feh. This was a good piece my Dear Lucarly. You need to write more of these types of things - I simply enjoy the idea of a drunk Yusei, Crow or even Aki. Happy writing.

very interesting story...
Jack, bungee jumping? xD

A nice chapter but I think you could have made Mikage feel more happier about it. I would think that she would have beliebe Jack or myabe at least smile.

However, you made the story very interesting, so I think that's good.

Keep writing and thanks for doing my request!

The name "Mikage" is horribly redundant. Sorry for my term but that's the only word that can describe it. Like... Almost every paragraph, that name was in there.
Very OOC on everyone's parts.
I'm sorry, but I can't praise it. I'm not trying to be mean, but... This isn't your best.