The last little bit, at the end, really made the story!

Okay I totally love your story and would love love love it if you continued it... or made a sequel to see what happens. Or maybe write a longer piece. It was amazing! :D

great story

glad to see that you are still writing, even though it is not for Bones. Great one shot.

ever cute! i just love rhetta & grace together.

Nicely done!

I was glad to see another great story!

LOL, sorry for the late review. Just got back from a weekend at a friends house in the middle of nowhere, with no air conditioning. Let me tell you, it's murder in the middle of the Arizona summer. What a relief it was to come home and nearly fall asleep on the kitchen floor! ;)

It's definitely interesting seeing the Rhetta/Grace relationship. I'm used to reading Booth/Brennan from you, but that's normal as those two used to be perfect for each other.

Another amazing piece of art from you! The 'He tried to make me choose once, you know? So I smacked him upside the head and told him he didn’t have a hope in hell' made me laugh so freaking hard my monitor got soaked with coffee. Then of course, you nearly had me in tears once again, but the action between Rhetta and Grace started making me laugh again. The banter between the two women is hilarious!

Absolutely excellent! I loved reading this story.

*hugs*

Carrie