Wow, this fic was incredible, I love it. It's really sad in the Cain-Abel arc, and then turning into a hilarious Loki-Naoya conversation, i lol'd so much there. Oh, and the last speech by Loki and Naoya was amazing. Lol in shotacon part, hence, they're really made to be with each others.

Oh, and on a side note, i think that the MC is more OOC than Naoya. He's like... acting to not he's supposed to be, a 17-years old teenager.

Anyhow, i love this. I'd like to see more of Devil Survivor fic from you later.

"love him enough to corrupt him", eh? It's silly how close love and hate get at times- a thing you portrayed very well here. Impressive fic, especially with the ominous feel at the end. Loki was simply hilarious at times and Naoya the 'incestual shotacon kidnapper' was twisted as ever (although he is much more likable here than in the game). I don't know what to think about MC though since you've made him act all silly and vurnerable- would he really survive like that when faced with a demon-infested town? Oh well, MC's character in the game can be interpreted in any way one wants so your portrayal is okay as well.

The cat ear part was just plain weird though- where did you get that from?