Oooh, loved the randomness! And the insanity! Pwease continue! It was funny and fuckhot, and I loved this Edward - especially the tatoos *drool*

I like this oneshot a lot! I liked that Edward wasn't so perfect and was just an ordinary guy (Okay a good looking one;)

Great stuff!

dayymmnn

I know you wrote this over 2 years ago,

but still, a very nice one shot

Steamy and the clear dynamic between the two was amazing, I would love to read a followup or something, great story!

Such a steamy little story until the very end where I thought, "Oh shit!"

Even though it's been over a year since this was written, I just found and read this. Now I hope you'll come back and add more to it because it was really great! I didn't find it random at all, it felt very authentic to life and how losing one's v-card really is. And I would love to see more from these two- if they could have a relationship and what it would look like. So on story alert you shall go ( in vain I'm sure but still..)!

I found this via a recommendation by the Jasper's Naughty girls and I am so pleased I followed it up. I thought it was wonderful and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Found this because of Jasper's Naughty girls.. Loved it! I do hope it continues! Edward owes Bella a little something! LOL And we gotta find out if Charlie busted them! LOL

Love this! It's nice to see a more lighthearted, more realistic lemon. I hope you do write more, I'd love to read another chapter!

That was funny! :D

And it would be good of a beginning of s longer story ;)

Oh shit! bwahahahaha!

That was great.

haha this is great! i love it, a second chapter would be awesome :)

Please continue this!

I have read and re-read this story so many times. I love it, and now I am saying so. Thank you!

love it!