so...It's been ten years...but would you mind finishing this one? I really like it.

Aw that is so sad! Update soon please!

Wow sucha good story! I can't wait to see whats going to happen next! Poor Ami! Poor Zoicite! :( its all so sad, I'm hoping its going to get alot happier though! :) lol please update soon!

Awesome story you've got going so far. I've really enjoyed it.

Just a few things.

If you're going to put down someone's thoughts, it's easier to decipher whose thoughts they are if the words are in italics as opposed to brackets. No, this isn't a law or anything, but just about every other author on this site puts character thoughts in italics. It's also easier to follow, because a few times I had trouble deciphering between who was speaking telepathetically and who was actually talking out loud.

Another thing is the punctuation issues in your dialogue. Periods go within a quotation marks.

Example: "Zoi, I think I really got you this time".

Should be: "Zoi, I think I really got you this time."

Just a small thing :grins: but other than it was fine.

Very nice scene, a bit on the dialogue-overload at times, but nothing that was emphasized too strongly.

Good job on this so far.

oh no what happened! they broke up! y? y? *cries* they were so cute together! omg! i'm goin to cry! r u goin to continue? hrm? i guess not since it says last updated in 2002...but...aww...my heart is breaking now...oh y oh y, is it over already? Zoi n Ami...*sniff*...

more, more, is there going to be any continuation?

GREAT story! i think you deserve applause *applaudes you and the story* I cant wait for the next chappies to come. pleeze hurry and i again applaude you *applaudes for the second time*

OMG! That is all I can say about this! It is beyond great! I am loving every minute of it! I can't wait until Zoi and Ami meet again. I wonder what Ami was really trying to say? I just about lost it there at the end...and it takes a lot to make me cry.

Oh I hear voices too...only mine tell me that when grow up, I'm going to rule the universe! I like listening to them...you are right, definately a blast. I read your profile and ::blinks:: are you me? Ami-chan is my fav senshi, Willow is my fav characer (besides Spike...gotta love hot, British vamp!) and I am a die hard Phoebe/Cole fan! She needs to wake up and realize that she still loves him!

Ummmm, that's about it...I can't wait till the next chapter, till then, ja ne!

*looks at ami and zoi sadly* poor guys *sobb* ack! I gotta know what happens! I luv the fic, please please please write more!

...Wonderful story...love it... I hope that you'll update as soon as possible. I can't wait to read the next part...

This is an absolutely marvelous story. I do hope you woud finish it soon, I would enjoy reading the ending!

finally got a chance to read this chapter lol...it was coolies dont forget to finish it or i'll cry

This is an interesting story so far. I am really looking forward to finding out what happens. I am very curious about the results of the research. Please continue.

Good job, Lilian. Nice rewrite. Keep it up.

This story just rocks! I need more I tell you.